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To love a Woman #WriteBravely


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Sirimiri-Woman

What makes a woman happy?

Baubles and flowers?

Chocolates and fragrances?

A handful of stars?

No Sir, you are wrong there, that’s not what it is.

Come with me into the mind of a woman

Because her happiness lies in this;

Trust her, love her

Care for her like she’s fragile.

Shower her with compliments, without any guile.

support her, stand by her

help her nurture her dream.

Don’t roll your eyes when she takes hours to choose her cream!

Accompany her on shopping trips, even though you may feel like a fool

when she’s drooling all over Ranveer Singh, agree with her he’s cool.

When you twiddle your thumbs, as she’s crying a river

call her mother/sister/best friend and she’ll love you forever.

When she creates a hue and cry, every time you watch your sport

point out the best looking guy in the team,

and there will be an instant rapport!

When she screams like a banshee from hell

she’s feeling insecure, can’t you tell?

Let her speak her mind, all she wants for you to do is hear.

Hear her out, don’t offer any advice, and you’ll be a dear.

When she’s fed up of household chores

take her out man, don’t be a bore!

She’ll love you like heaven, she’ll fight for you like hell

She’ll word your thoughts, even before you could tell

She’ll go to any lengths, to see a smile on your face

She’ll always make you proud; she’ll never lose her grace.

She’s a woman, what no man can ever be

cherish her, treasure her

Yours is all that she wants to be.

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15 Comments

  1. Sigh.. this really reminded me of a lot I’m missing out on. Lovely way of putting it 🙂

  2. Aha! This is such a lovely ode to all women. I am still smiling at ‘when she’s drooling all over Ranveer Singh, agree with her he’s cool’… Yes, men should certainly do that!! Loved this fun and meaningful poem of yours, Mayuri!

  3. Ah! Very nice. Reminds me of the Billy Joel song,” She’s always a woman to me.”

    Mine:

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  4. Mayuri Nidigallu zainab

    The lines are just perfect. You said it all my friend!

  5. Beautiful! Nodding at every sentence.

  6. Beautiful way to woman’s heart! You have to put it up during V-day!!

  7. If every woman got even half of these things we will have only happy couples everywhere! 🙂

  8. Nodding in agreement and smile lines on face… thats how I was, reading this classic piece of thought, Mayuri!
    The part that I agreed to the core was the one where you say, “Hear her out, dont offer any advice…”! That’s what a woman needs, a sounding board; most of the times…
    -Anagha From Team MocktailMommies

  9. Its really very nice to enter into the mind of a woman through your post.
    Presence of Ranveer Singh here is awesome.
    Very nicely penned.

  10. Oh yes, this is what I am going to show to all my male friends and better half too. What lovely lines – an ode to women.
    Beautiful.

  11. That’s cool. I’m still smiling! Very nice. 🙂

  12. I wonder if any man can feel this verse so beautifully written by you. You have weaved every woman’s emotions.

  13. So beautifully written. And yes, one every man should read, I agree.

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  14. Haha. What an ode. The best man in the team thing works for me! Heartfelt poetry! Good one Mayuri.

  15. Wow Mayuri! Loved each line of it, you have disclosed woman secrets, hope men are reading carefully.

    Cheers
    MeenalSonal from AuraOfThoughts

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