The Date #FridayFotoFiction



They had walked in separately, but were inseparable since they met. They sat there, hands entwined, eyes speaking a million words and secret smiles being exchanged.

 An elderly couple looked at them and smiled, as this young love on a date reminded them of their courtship days. Another couple, in the midst of a nasty argument, sent spiteful glances their way. A lone woman sitting at a corner table, reading a book and nursing her coffee, let out a wistful sigh as she watched them.

 At their table, oblivious to the world, the couple were playfully meshing their fingers again. Unseen by all the eyes watching them the man slipped a tiny packet into the palm of the woman, which she immediately crushed into her hand. She stood up and as she brushed her skirt the packet made its way into her pocket. And yet another drug deal was done.


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  1. An amazingly twisted tale !!

  2. Great twist and a perfect example of – what you see is not always true.

  3. Why oh why couldn’t they just be a regular romantic pair?
    Wonderful twist, Mayuri.

  4. Right till the end wth the package was exchanged I thought it was going to be a proposal! Killer twist!!

  5. I knew I knew it- there is going to be surprise in the end .Its Mayuri after all. Amazingly done yet again .

  6. Heady twist!
    Reality is far from what meets the eyes.
    – Anagha From Team MocktailMommies

  7. Wow great twist at the end. I was bracing myself for an awwww moment when suddenly the earth under my feet shook. LOL

  8. ooohhhh!!! That was seriously an unexpected turn in the plot!! super duper!!

  9. I soo did not expect that. haha! But at the end of it, it hit me on a similar situation in Breaking Bad. Could happened, very much can. 🙂

  10. haha, Hero became the Villain. Great twist Mayuri.

  11. This was the best take on the prompt I have read so far. The irony throughout the post makes me ponder over the thought processes in the world. Someone is looking at the couple with nostalgia, the other is looking with disgust, and another one admires them with longing. While the couple oblivious to the love and positivity around them willingly slips into the dark abyss.

  12. WOW post , everyone is depicting according to their inherent feelings , whereas the couple is busy in an entirely different deal

  13. Wonderful twist Mayuri.

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