The world is such a wonderful place!
Things are just as they seem!
(Tee-hee. It’s the rose tinted glasses
that show her what she sees!)
People are honest
They say what they mean
(This statement is the best
it is such a scream!)
I’ve got true friends
Who’ll be there for me
(Did I mention the blinders
that stop her from seeing?)
I’m here to do my job
The rest I leave to God
(I’m sure He’s wondering
should I rewire her stupid thoughts?)
Every dark day ends
and arises a new dawn
(Gawd I’m so bored
I’m not even going to stifle this yawn!)
Happiness when shared
Generously multiplies
(Is she drugged or drunk
lemme check her glazed eyes)
Honesty is a virtue
that I hold very dear
( I can’t take anymore of this
I’m getting outta here!)
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Beautiful poem. Loved it !!!
haha..enjoyed it..poignant yet with a dose of humour. Btw, congrats on the self-hosting. All the best, Mayuri 🙂
Beautiful, quirky ,chirpy adorable wonderfully rhymed .I have a bit of a problem with poems .I can only read them if they tell a story.Your story was fun.I like your personal but loved your alter ego .She is cool.Let’s invite her to blogchatter
nice one
Nice one!
I love your alter ego… She sounds so much fun and cool 😉 this is a very creative write I have read on alter egos.
good one undoubtedly, loved the candid chitchat here 🙂
Oh boy! You are too good at poetry! Humour and the stark reality of life, intertwined expertly! Kudos!
This was fabulous, Mayuri. Very cheeky. I loved it.
The poem feels great but it kind of was above my understanding. What’s the author’s perspective here? Can you pls explain
Anil, the author is having a silent conversation with her alter ego, who is having fun refuting all that the author believes and thinks.
You know those filmy scenes, where hero/heroines see their reflections in the mirror who question them and laugh at them, that types :))))
Hope the poem makes sense now :))
I really liked the concept of alter ego and the person having a conversation and how they see the world so differently. Cool one.
you and your alter ego seem good company, I think anyones alter ego would just say the opposite of what he says!!!nice one http://simpleindianmom.in/ http://6-ways-can-make-travel-lot-cheaper-calculations/ /
beautiful poem 🙂
Good one 🙂
Haha! very witty write 🙂
Aditi
Loved it Mayuri..the chat between your alter ego and you. You are good with poetry..keep writing:)
Interesting and how you challenged a thought with another. Smart one.
your alter ego is cool and fun! I like her
Loved it! Your alter ego is super cool! Looking forrward for more.
This is such a fantastic poem! A mirror to every mind…very well written! Keep writing!!
That little voice in the head always criticises everything we say, no? Maybe it could change its thought process, if it could get a life 😀
haha..this is what we call creative writing! Chirpy and witty altogether 🙂
Hahaha! Too good Mayuri! I often have conversations in my head just like the one you shared! And most often my alter ego declares…..I am nuts!
great post!
Hahah Mayuri, this is such a brilliant poem! I liked the quirkiness. This sounds like a conversation in my head. 😉
Must say, quite a flow 😀
Thanks:)