I think it rained a little #Poem

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 I think it rained a little

some drops escaped a laden sky

a sky that couldn’t hold them in anymore

drops that were heavy and benign

 

I think it rained a little

some drops trailed down on a parched expanse

washing away the dust of grief

and blurring questions that had answers nay

 

I think it rained a little

some drops found their way to a place

that had lost hope and hardened with resentment

till those eyes saw tears on that face

13 Comments

  1. Mayuri Nidigallu

    Prasanna

    May 10, 2017 at 2:51 pm

    So cool….mindblowing thoughts, beautiful words, moving emotion!!

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      Mayuri Nidigallu

      May 10, 2017 at 6:34 pm

      Thanks for reading, Prasanna 🙂

  2. Mayuri Nidigallu

    Ashwini Dodani

    May 10, 2017 at 3:47 pm

    Small, sweet and deep. Poetry for life <3

  3. Mayuri Nidigallu

    Alana

    May 10, 2017 at 3:51 pm

    This gives me images of a drought broken, hitting people full of grief. Well done.

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      Mayuri Nidigallu

      May 10, 2017 at 6:35 pm

      Thanks for reading, Alana 🙂

  4. Mayuri Nidigallu

    Amrita

    May 10, 2017 at 8:59 pm

    Such a heartfelt poem.I think it really rained a little when I read this poem.Poignant is the word I think.Just so real!

    1. Mayuri Nidigallu

      Mayuri Nidigallu

      May 11, 2017 at 8:52 am

      Thanks for reading, Amrita:)

  5. Mayuri Nidigallu

    Shilpa Gupte

    May 11, 2017 at 11:11 am

    Such a beautiful poem – simple and beautiful! Well done, Mayuri!

    1. Mayuri Nidigallu

      Mayuri Nidigallu

      May 11, 2017 at 11:19 am

      Thanks for reading, Shilpa:)

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    Sanch @ Sanch Writes

    May 11, 2017 at 3:54 pm

    I love the repetition of the first line; it has a good impact and the poem has a melodious, yet sad feel to it.

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