Shine

It had come to him prematurely. He shone in an area which was dreaded by others, who wondered how he could be so unaware of his achievement. His Mother thought he looked more like his father now. He wondered why his wife seemed disgruntled with him lately. He liked the shine of his Bald head.

Written for The Daily Post prompt; Shine

Published by Mayuri Nidigallu
Tarot Card Reader. Writer. Traveler. Sweet Tooth-er. I write from my heart, edit from my mind and hope that my words will touch your soul.

7 thoughts on “Shine

  1. Hahaha! Very creative and interesting. Didnt see it coming! πŸ™‚

  2. Totally unexpected. I like Bruce Willis’s head.It’s clean shaven not bald.
    Very interesting way of holding our interest

  3. An amazingly creative take:)

  4. Bald headed folks! Fun twist at the end. πŸ˜€

  5. Hahaha that was funny. The approach seemed to have a serious note, never expected it to end on a funny note though.

  6. Nice one with a great twist. keep it up

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