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Writing as part of Team Purple Rain for the prompt, ‘Tiny Shoes’
Beautifully expressed. Pain of aged parents ….. really tears flowing down my cheeks …..
Wow.. this broke my heart at the end. Superbly written.
Moving…true and very sensitively penned. 🙂
The story unfolded so sweetly until the end, it was tragic what happened to the old couple. There are so many like them, discarded, rejected and forgotten by their own children. Lovely poem.
HArsh but true for so many parents. So sad.. 🙁
Touched my heart.. very nicely expressed ☺
Oh! Everything was going fine but the end…it's heart-wrenching.
Mayuri, Mayuri, Mayuri…. How have we not met before? <3
Dayum! A touching take on the prompt, Mayuri.And the sad truth of many families!
Aww no..why did it have to end on that note? 🙁
How beautifully you have expressed the truth thru these lines. Touched my heart! Thanks 🙂
Sad that this had to end like this.
Everything was so beautiful but the end..You captured the emotions so well..
Aww! So sad and yet a bitter truth! Beautifully done, Mayuri!
The last lines touched my heart. How beautifully you have expressed the pain of old age parents who are left to fend for themselves. Excellent take on the prompt.
This was really touching. A parent undergoing their old-age in a faraway home is the worst a child can do. 🙁 Beautifully written.
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