Day 2 – His Last Wish #55words #Drabbleweek

Day 2- His last wish

His last wish was for someone to relieve him of his burden. 
‘Avarice will do you no good’, his father’s words forced themselves into his thoughts. 
He sighed, and paused to rest his shaking legs, reflecting on his father’s wisdom. The weight of the ginormous sugar crystal on the ant’s back was wearing him down.

7 thoughts on “Day 2 – His Last Wish #55words #Drabbleweek

  1. This is excellent! I never expected that last bit. And you spun a message in there too 🙂 Mayuri, you are a beautiful find in the blogging world for me 🙂

  2. wow..this was superb! A great message so wonderfully woven.

  3. Loved the message and the story. Written superbly. Am loving going through all your posts 🙂 ~ Simran

  4. Wonderful ! Love it.

  5. This is an amazing one… Took me totally by surprise 🙂

  6. Good gyan there. I remember reading a Hindi story when I very little where the ant dies buried under a mountain of sugar even while he's chanting 'All that sugar is mine.'

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